http://poemwithnorhyme.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] poemwithnorhyme.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] daisysusan 2011-06-03 04:33 am (UTC)

Ohh, I am loving this!!

(It’s hard, now, to look back and not see that Mark beat him at his own game as well, a shrewd and calculating businessman, friendship be damned. The understanding, universal as it is, stings his perfectionist soul: there’s always someone better.) <--- Something about this hit me particularly hard - just fantastic!

Seeing his friendship with Mark boiled down to that number, that Mark didn’t value him at thirty percent or thirty-five percent, that he was worth less than one percent of this stupid project that was his best friend’s life, it stuck with him for a long time. <--- This too. Wow. Just. Wow.

*scurries to next part*

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